Letter of Thank You for Submission and Request for Revision



Letter of Thank You for Submission and Request for Revision :




This letter should be typed in the official letter-head of the company.

The Company's Name

Door Number and Street's Name,
Area Name,
City.
Postal Code : XXXXXX
Phone Number : 0000 - 123456789


TO :

The Receiver's Name,
Door Number and Street's Name,
Area Name,
City.
Postal Code : XXXXXXX


Date :


Reference :


Dear _____________,


The speech that you submitted to me for presentation at John Franklin's retirement party is excellent with one minor exception.


Inasmuch as John is somewhat sensitive about his age, I feel that it would be inappropriate to make any reference to this fact. I would appreciate it if you would delete those sections in Paragraphs 6 and 7 which specifically comment about his age and/or employ the words "golden years", and find a suitable substitution.


Once again, the speech is very well written.


Thank you.


Yours Sincerely,


(The Sender's Signature)


The Sender's Name


Enc. :







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